Informal letter

Dear Ludo,
How are you? I hope your travel is very well.
America is very wonderful and impressive. Here every things is bigger than in France: cars, highways, houses, buildings and macdonald's burgers. You right, America and France are very differents.
I saw the "Grand Canyon", it's amazing and seems unreal. Do you know that you can get lost or die there. Then, I went to Las Vegas, I found it was too much. There are casinos, people, city lights everywhere and everytime. It's the city of dream and expansiveness.
I also went to New York. I like this city, I saw central park, the statue of liberty it's so tall and Braodway!
Broadway is amazing, I could see the stage it was like in my dreams. One day, I will entrance on this stage and I will be a star. Tomorrow, I go to Cindy and Peter's house.
I will try to call you and I will send so soon a new letter.

See you soon
xoxo
Lola

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Top tips for freshers!

When I arrived at university, I didn't know any one. The first week was very hard because I was so shy and I didn't speak with students. I didn't go to visit of university so I lost everytime. Then I met students in my class, they learnd to.
So my tips for freshers will be:
Come to visit of university. Often the freshers think to go at university it's very great because we start school by the end of september and a lot of them forget or don't want to go to visit the university. Know your university is very important. This day a lot of freshers are there so you aren't alone,  you can met your future schoolfriends. Moreover, this day the professor give shedule and explain how it works. The university is a place of meeting and discoveries.